05 September 2011

Holes


weeds entwine the holes
wounds left by souls loved and lost
kiss my broken heart


44 thinkers thunk a thought:

  1. nice...love that last line...great haiku cheryl...

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  2. beautiful Cheryl ... and yeah, the last line is so many things ....loved it!

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  3. I feel there's a lot in this - great haiku.

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  4. Beautifully said, Cheryl. I like it — a lot.
    — K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  5. 'Wounds left by souls loved and lost' this is such a loaded line!

    Well thought out!!

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  6. Weeds covering wounds... I liked that. Sad though it is.

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  7. sadness and tragedy... lovely haiku ~

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  8. we all have holes to fill.

    ROG, ABC Wednesday team

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  9. I think there's a lot to think about in this haiku. It's sad but true that we all have broken hearts with weeds covering the holes.

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  10. Hauntingly lovely. Thank you for sending it our way.

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  11. I'm not sure that I want the wounds to be entwined by weeds. I want something a bit more healing please; like comfrey or camomile.

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  12. You paint such lovely pictures with your words. Really wonderful Haiku.

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  13. sweet and sad all in one, I enjoyed this very much!

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  14. This is really beautiful! Each line is a little bit unexpected, but still makes sense.

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  15. What a lovely Haiku, today. It goes so well with the picture.

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  16. Nicely written, Cheryl:

    weeds entwine the holes
    wounds left by souls loved and lost
    kiss my broken heart


    I love the these broken heart and stolen heart peoms. Your 'broken heart' is on the sad side, as are most.
    ..

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  17. Wonderful haiku and photo. A great take on this prompt too.

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  18. Wow. And, yes. Thanks for sharing this with OSI.

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  19. This is Awesome! Beautifully thought out. You have such a beautiful blog.

    Thank you so much for stopping by mine and leaving that such a comment. :)

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  20. wow ... layered with varying emotions!

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  21. gorgeous haiku,it does feel sad, but has redemptive feelings about it as well

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  22. Heartstoppingly (is that a word?) beautiful.

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  23. Beautiful interpretation of H !

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  24. Beautiful and sad at the same time. Love the graphic that accompanies it.

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  25. This is lovely!

    I hope you're having a great day...

    XO

    Anna

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