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Since it's Saturday, I'm linking up to Saturday Centus over at Jenny's place. Each week Mr. Jenny provides us with a prompt then sends us on our way to write. There are rules: the prompt must be left intact; the story has to be told in 100 words or less, excluding the prompt; and *gasp* no pictures allowed.
I've decided I'll be writing about something true whenever it's possible.
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The call came after midnight. It's time. My father and mother went to pick up Memere. My sister rode with me to the hospital. All of us silently rode the elevator to the third floor.
The ICU nurse kindly told Memere that Pepere had held on as long as he could. He'd waited until she was in the building before passing. . .
Awakened from my reverie by the cart, I sighed. It was Fathers Day, 1984. When I heard that voice in the hallway, I politely sent the maid away. I needed time to find my happy voice. Two months had passed. I knew dad would need happy today.
Peace.
Memere (mem ay) and Pepere (pep ay) are the French Candian names we called my father's parents.
Ah...I have stood in those shoes. I understand.
ReplyDeleteTimes like these, memories like these can hit you like a sucker punch.
ReplyDeleteNice work, Cheryl!!
Like PJ, I felt the punch. Well done.
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Hi Cheryl, thanks for your visit. You have written a very nice post. True father's day, or any other day, for that matter, can bring back memories. Hopefully they are good ones. I lost my dad at age 8 due to alcohol, he just left us. As an adult I learned how to understand his side of the story, finally before he died in 1984. Blessings
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great blog ~ glad I stopped by!
ReplyDeleteCheryl, I could feel the elevator as it rose to the third floor. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThis was great but very sad Centus this week. Reminds me of my dad when he passed although it was nothing like this. Good job.
ReplyDeleteSo, what is it about these holidays and writing memes to bring out the sadness and melancholy in us?? Well done Cheryl:-) Hope you are well..Peace and blessings
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They advertise like yiu say" do it for your family, do it for yourself."
Simply beautiful, beautifully simple and poignant, well written.
ReplyDeleteAww Cheryl, I hope this memory isn't such a sad one now...
ReplyDeletebeautiful job!
ReplyDeleteGreat emotions evoked in this one. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully done.
ReplyDeleteCheryl, My eyes are teary over this. I feel the poignant loss in this piece. And you are wrong. This is very elegant writing, spare and powerful. Thank you for linking.
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